Good-Bye

by Liz   Apr 30, 2005


By the time you read this letter,
I would like to let you know, I feel better.
All my pain is gone,
As i now lay here on the bed,
I don't have any worries, no sorrow,
Sorry i cant see you tomorrow.
Because as you can see,
Yes, i know its really me.
By the time you read this letter,
I would like you to know i feel much better.
I hope you don't dread,
As I lay in my bed,
Dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Algenis

    Thank you. 2 get a 5/5 i'm glad. i just started writting 4 days ago. i read some of yours they were great. i give you a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by rrrrrrr

    Hey liz.. very deep, girl, very deep. I'm hoping that you dont feel this way in real life, and if you are, good luck. I have been through that to.. best wishes,
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    i like that poem.. but thats sad ...
    is it really you that feels like that??
    sorry for askn.. sam xx

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    hey liz, wat ever your goin through im sorry... and thanku so much for your comment... please dont feel the you do, it makes me sad wen i read poems that are like you can handle anymore..... im sorry!!! luv sam

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey, I honestly hope you don't feel you have to kill yourself.

    I have felt depressed, but my friend says that there is always someone out there that loves you, and if you kill yourself, you also kill them.

    I'm here for you always =)
    Shirlz

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