WOW! I thought this was grrreeaat! Great write.
Car

LOVED the first stanza. Amazing piece

Love,
Heather

i really really really admire your writing talent... this was a great song. i wish i could hear it to music.

This is soooo great! I could almost sing along wit it!lol! Great job hun! Your very talented!
Love alwayz......
Haily
XOXOXOXOXO

That was a very good poem! 5.0! plz return the favor by voting and commenting on sum of my poems! ♥

You have a lot of talent I really enjoy reading your work. If I could only sing I could have a better picture in my mind of how it would sound in a song. Great work once again! Take Care~ Brooke

Right the computer wont let me comment on whiskey goodbyes, I will try again later, these were both expressive and brilliantly written, I very much enjoyed reading them, The first stanza was amazing in this and the second stanza in whiskey goobyes was also brilliant, keep it up, very well done to you :) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

wow, really good. nice job. 5/5

~no more

Is this a song??? WOW, one of the best I have ever read, that was excellent!!! I hope that you are ok??? Just like unwanted gil, I found a tune in my head too....Keep writing!!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

Beautifully done, I look foreward to reading more of ur work!

another awesome poem. you've got some talent.

Excellent. This was quite perfect. I'd love to hear it to music. Great job.5/5
~Freak~