Comments : Drowning ©

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I saw this on bebo hun. Admittedly I didn't read all of it, but I can tell you that the parts that I read really were touching. I hope that you're doing okay~!! Really!!!!! I'm always with you....spiritually....lol. Just don't do something stupid, lol. Love you lots hunny buns. lol!!

    Mwah....ttyl..bye

    ~Sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    wow that was an incredible poem, ur a truly talented writer, keep up the good work!! please rate and comment my latest "something much more", thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow your amazing, defiantly a new fave!!! You style, flow and emotions are so amaazing and touching, iloved i loved it, i loved it(I'll stop now,lol) 5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Isla smithley

    Woah wats this 2 do with georgi r u having problems or sumthin???

  • 18 years ago

    by lindzy

    wow, that's so awsome, and ya kids CAN be so cruel, i kno how that feels, good job though, i like most of ur work so far, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aurora

    the meaning of the poem sort of changes or you could say that different people could interpret the poem in different ways. anyhow i really like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Your descriptions were right on and the scheme of it was solid all the way through, well conveyed and displayed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    You did great until the last that just sucked you really need to work on that last part. Oh well If you get time could you vote and comment on any of my featured work...

  • wow this is some powerful stuff! very flowing and emotional loved it! >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 18 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Hey, hey, hey!
    I aint spoken to you for a while...you dont seem to be in the forums as much as you used to be. In fact no one except 'bashers' seem to go there now. I shall be the last solitary meatball hoagie on my own lol. Anywayz great poem, I really like it.
    Hope you're ok.
    Well take care,
    Your fellow meatball hoagie,
    Rachelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    GEORGI!!!! Georgi, Georgi, Georgi!! :-D!! I'm your favorite poet? Awwwww!! :-D!!!!! I looove you soo much! lol! *cyber huggles* lol!!! thank you, my sweet carmel bunny/meatball hoagie with meatbally goodness! lol!

    ~Sierra

  • wow... very visual i felt like i was there! great use of words! this is a great poem, flows well and great sructure! your very talented! >>5/5<<
    *bec* xXx