Suicide (not sure about title.)

by Beautiful x Disaster   May 4, 2005


Once every 18 minutes
Worldwide
Another soul is lost
To suicide

Suicide is attempted
Each and every day
Many attempts failed
But some get their way

But the truth of it all
Is not the way it seems
Committing suicide
Is not the best of dreams

I know what you're thinking
"Its the perfect way out"
But honestly,
Is that what life is about?

Think about would you?
Please just try to see
Life is about love
And prosperity

Its not about self hate
Or trying to belong.
Its about holding your head high
And being strong

People will try to stop you
Its simply a fact,
Just try to overcome it
And watch how you react

Neglecters and abusers
Will surely try to stop you.
You have to prove them wrong,
And make it through

If you simply quit
They'll win, you'll lose
Its your decision
You get to choose.

Just don't let yourself down
You have so much to live for
A full life ahead of you
Ready to explore

-The truth is, most of the people who attempt suicide usually want to live after they took action. Most of them make it because of modern medicine. But then there are those, that attempt it, realize they want to live, and then die because its too late and they didnt think it through.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LQFootballer67

    hey that's a great message, and a great way to keep people informed about what's really going on around them that they don't even know. it's a sad reality, but hey, in the end there are losers and winners, just hope that you come out a winner! 5/5 Great Job! thanks for sharing!

    <3 Peter

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    this is extremely beautiful and very very true! wow! i loved it soo much! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Insane Inside And Out

    Beautiful! Keep up the writing please. Check out my stuff any time you want and you can ask me any time to check out your stuff. Your writing has a lot of feeling in it and flows well.

  • 18 years ago

    by redxiii

    i like the message alot so just for that 5/5 i mean thats how i feel too

  • 18 years ago

    by Love~IS~4~LOZERS!

    great poem good message beimg sent out!