oh wow. . .you are such a great writer that brought tears to my eyes. . .you are very talented and it will get you somewhere. . . great poem. . i really liked it. . if you get a chance check out my 2 favorite poems. . .what i could do with you . . .and. . i wish i was a kid again. . .be sure to comment on them it would really mean alot.
WOW!!!!!!! that is awsome but so sad! I hope this really didnt happen to you and if so i am sorry. this is a really good poem you didnt force the rhyme it flowed together nicely. great job. keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!!!!!!!!!!
IS this a true story? if it is I"m really sorry. this was an excellent poem. I hope to read more poems that you wrote. Check out my poem : She died because of love her heart no one couls save. I think you'll like it. ANd my poem: why do people choose to drink and drive? thanks!