Something Missing

by Elissa   May 5, 2005


I have been given a life that I live
So alone
Where my closest friend is myself,
I'm on my own
And theres something I feel,
Something inside my soul
Like theres something missing,
An empty space or hole
Because the thing that once made
Me happy has been taken
But what is it that has left me
So shaken
I need to know because I can't
Help but wonder
The thought wakes me from even
The deepest slumber
And now I realize what I didn't see
Before, but now I do
That the only one who can fill the
Empty space is you
And I know that won't happen but
That doesn't matter
Because I remember what happened the
First time, when I watched my world shatter.

-I meant to submit this a while back, well I guess I will now, It's not that good but oh well. please vote and comment-

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  • you duffus, you say to me not to diss on mine, but you diss on yours! lol, your deranged. but i submitted a new poem as well, check it out. by the way, that was a good poem, lol
    love always
    your friend
    harley

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    I love it! It flows smoothly and the emotion is deep.. Keep strong and take care ((always)) :

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Very well written. Easy to relate with. Keep it up!