Said Nothing...

by Tiffy   May 5, 2005


I saw you smiling but something was wrong
You said nothing and stared hard and long
I saw you laughing but that was so fake
You said nothing was wrong and tried to stay awake
I saw you make a joke but you wanted to cry
You said nothing was wrong and gave the same old sigh
I saw you helping out but you wanted to run and hide
You said nothing was wrong and wanted to go for a ride
I saw you concentrating but your eyes began to close
You said, \"I\'ll miss you\" and smiled like a rose
I saw you let go of the wheel and take a deep breath
You crashed into a tree with no life left
I saw your head droop foward and this was the end
You were dead and I wondered if it was something I said
I asked you what was wrong...
...you said it was nothing

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    beautiful poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristen

    beautiful poem

  • 19 years ago

    by yessie

    i liked it but it left me wanting more keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Wolfwood

    I like the way it was written, it flowed well. Keep writing, could you rate and comment some of mine.