Fallen Astray

by Corrie   May 5, 2005


Once I was trapped in the prison of my own dark heart, I didnt know where to start, or how to begin to explain all of the pain. I couldnt find the words to say,God please help me I've fallen astray.

But now I've tried every other way, I've seen the light, and now I know I cant go another day without you so, now I'm gunna cry to you and say, God please help me I've fallen astray, and I want to do life your way!

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  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    make breaks in between like
    "Once I was trapped in the prison of my own dark heart,
    I didnt know where to start
    or how to begin to explain
    all of the pain." or something like that have a good day

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    Very nice poem. Short but sweet. Keep writing, my dear!

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    This was good but I wish you would have expressed more about how you fallen astay I think that would bring this poem out more but good job...

  • 19 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    I love this poem. God is good isn't he.
    It helps the flow of your poem if you have it more like this:
    Once I was trapped in the prison of my own dark heart,
    I didnt know where to start,
    ~anne~

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