Lack Of Pride

You -really- hate your father? or your parents??

I know it sounds lame, but im pretty sure they love you...they just show it in a poor way.

this would have been better if it was re titled depression. Because it really didn't hold to to the title. You painted alot of good images but none seemed to match it was like you were trying to take a bigger picture and chop it down so much so fast that you got lost in it. At least thats the way I saw it maybe another time...

love you, I love you, yes I do, *makes a baby face*

nice poem zac! 5/5. like katie said...i feel bad for u too. but we all love u!!!
much love,
*jen-jen*

Aww...Zac. Good poem, I feel so bad for you. your parents are idiots. They dont know what they have. Luvs!
katie