Red

"The scars in my mind
crying my fears so softly
just end all of this

the lines on my wrist
bleed out my hate so slowly
how long till I die"

I like how you used scars on your mind instead of scars on your arm like most people do. Its very original. then you use lines on your arm instead of lines in your mind I like how you swapped the whole thing around.

"can't hear you voice call
you're screaming in vain for me
painful death in red "

Lol I think you mean "Your voice call" i hate typos.. anyways I like this ending. its powerful but light. it isnt like "bam in your face" its subtle which I like. good write. I enjoyed reading this. You should check out some of mine.

Very powerful and sad.

you're a terrific writer. sad, but wonderful.

More self defeating poem then anything taken I think from a victim's point of view its sad but a good job with the wording...

That was very creative i really enjoyed reading it