Wow, this was amazing. Truly a great poem... wow. 5555/5. Great job, I think this is one of my faves from you. Keep it up! Take care,
Car

wow that rocked you got soooo much talent !!!!!! your on my fav list......keep it up!!*mwah*

that poem was awesome!!! you gotta great talent so keep it up!

I love this one, I hardly ever give out 5's, but this one is great!

WOW!WOW!WOW! OMG I loved this soooooo much! It is such an amazing poem! Just wow! Im truly blown away! Great job! Definatley a 5!
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOOX

That was an amazing poem! Well worth the read. Full of emotion! You did an exellent job I loved it! Take Care~ Brooke

That was a veery good poem! I really liked it! 5.0 ♥

wow, very good. well writen. good job. 5/5

~no more

This is amazing, very strongly written. It grabbed me from the beginning to the end, so sad and beautiful at the same time. I really love this part:

“I wish I could give you the world
And be the boy you want me too be”
A single tear slipped from his cheek
And another that he didn’t want her to see

The part about the tear, brought tears to my eyes....Great poem, I love it!!!

Hey i love this peom it is great..5/5..your a great writer...Keep up the good work...<3 lindsey

This is a very good poem. I really liked it.

Rebecca.

i really liked it and the feelings are expressed as if i were goin through it. keep writin and take care
*hope that you can comment on mine*

One of the best poem's I have ever read

That was a very catchy title. very well written. and it was really sad.

OMG this poem is so sad. i really like it. 5/5 definately

Wow! That was such an amazing poem! I loved it! It was just, wow! Awesome job! (",)

~Krissy

what an excellent read. i really enjoyed it. it was very powerful and emotional. lacking something at the end, but it still was ery good. i could sense the sadness and hope in the poem. you're very talented.
~Freak~

wow i loved this poem ..... every word and ever line was awsome
good work
always smile
peaceeee

This is truly one of the best poems I've ever read. The wording and the flow was just superb. WOW! I truly love this one. Great job. A great big 5, it deserves so much more. hugs, love, *Ann*

Amy,
this is a wonderful poem!!!! i hope that this really didnt happen to you thou and if so i am so sorry. Keep up the good work. Alwasy believe in love and trust in God!!!
-Britt
p.s. if u have time check out my poems and comment if u can