Too Weak To Leave

by ºCrimsonTearsº   May 10, 2005


Loosen up your fingers,
Step back and look at me,
Why must you push me away?
You're the only one I see.

You're killing me inside,
You're tearing me apart,
You're destroying my lifeline,
My cold and grey heart.

You're slowly suffocating me,
Look deep into my eyes,
Your promising words are causing,
Me to believe all your lies.

And each and every day,
I fall down further to my knees,
I crumble away slowly,
But I'm just too weak to leave ....

(Sorry, This Isn't My Best But It Kinda Explains How I'm Feeling Right Now. Comments And Votes Appreciated.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Wow this poem was great. I loved it. You are such a good writer. Keep up the good writing. If you ever get a chance plz look at some of my poems. Thx ttyl

    Madison

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow this is rally good...So are the rest of your poems...keep writting...your great..Im adding your to my fav.

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Alot of emotion.. I loved the last stanza the most.. But overall it's amazing.. 5/5.. keep your head up and take care (always) xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem ,it was still good even if it wasn't your best but it was still amazing and I lOVED your ending truely beautiful...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse

    Great poem, I know what you mean.

    Jesse

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