wow! that was really harsh, but really GREAT!! it sounds like someone did you wrong, if you want to talk to me about it, you can e-mail me.

Serenia

Great Poem! 5.0

kinda freaky but great

who's it about? What happened, you don't gotta tell me i'm just curious, though. I hope you feel better. If you ever need someone to talk to then ring my messagebox. 5.0!

wow... that was harsh, but it was awesome. I kind of feel like that right now.

-:-Megan-:-

That poem is seriously excellent. The vocabulary is simply stunning like a punch in the face. - Beautiful.

Pat

That poem was really deep.I mean wow.I loved it I'm sorry if it was true (I'm not sure) but it was and Excellent poem! I voted a 5!!!

WOW this is extreamly good and i love it so much!

Its very good but scary for me. The way you put it was stunning but sometimes, no matter how this shocks me, that is what I wish happened to some others. I hope you feel better. My mailbox is always open if you need to talk :)

Jeez! theres a lot of hatred in that, real powerful! its grear stuff though

ambika :)

DAMMMMN that was great haha very good poem makes me wanna kick someones ass lol. keep it up

Wondeful Work, but Ouch... That's kind of harsh...

Just wanted to say that this is a great poem and i have a very strong connection.. keep up the good work and effort :)

Thats really good. super sad but really good :D

Wow.. this is a really strong poem.. your a really great writer.. keep it up =]P

This poem is great...know how ya feel

Ali~

This is a very...original poem...scares the he'll outta me! But it's great. Yet the fact it's choppy from a simple choke to falling off a house landing on her (or his) head seems to washy...if you want intense pain bring it. Haha...but no I think you coulda added more personal detail yet it's still wonderful 5+