You Ask

by Kayla   May 12, 2005


You ask what’s wrong
Well where do I start
I’m lonely, I'm sad
I have a broken heart
You ask my why I cut
And I’ll tell you it’s for the pain
I’m sorry if you don’t understand
I don’t know how to explain
You ask me why I cry
It’s because of my depression
When ever I look at myself
I see a destroyed reflection
You ask me why I don’t talk
What do you want me to say
I don’t want to talk about the way I feel
Because the emotion I don’t want to display
You ask me why I’m hurting
And I’ll tell you honestly
Its because I’m all alone
And I need someone desperately

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow wow wow !! one of ur best poems.... it started off with a great start... the last line could be changed though "i need you back desperately"
    well i like ur ending too
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by lilhippyangel

    Yeah I get on them every once in a while but not too often I have a couple of post

  • 18 years ago

    by lilhippyangel

    This poem is good and very well written. I knwo what it feels like alot of the time to feel that no one understands you and or is there for you....Please contact me if you ever feel your about to just lose it all....I can try to help!

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Wow that was really good... I know how you are feeling... Yea yea You probably hear that all the time, but I have been throught it all... And I have survived!!! Poetry is AWSOME theropy(i can't spell) Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE

    Hey kayla,
    I really like this poem.Then again all your poems are good. i gave you a 5/5. Keep writing. ttyl at school

    Madison

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