Mr Tear

by Treakle   May 13, 2005


That tiny trickle on your cheek,
It says so much to me,
It tells me how you feel inside,
When times for you are bleak.

Even though he presents sadness,
It feels to me as if,
His tiny self smiles at me,
Even now we're in madness.

He knows when you are feeling down
And never will I leave,
Because he tells me all you want
Is me to relieve you of that frown.

Except when Mr. Tear interrupts my cheek at night,
All I want to do is tell you how I feel inside,
I do not think my tear talks to you
As clearly as you’re tears always do.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Treakle

    thankyou so much, i really do like this one, it took some thought.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    That poem is amazing. It's got a lot of emotion! You got great talent! Your comment meant a lot to me so thankyou for that. You got a style all of your own so you better keep writing!! Lotsa luv, Gem xx

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