Goodbye!

by x~broken~angel~x   May 14, 2005


It was today that i left you
you begged me not to go as you held me in your arms
but u don't understand that i had to
you will never understand the pain, the feelings i kept inside
thats why i had to leave you instead of living by a lie
i thought i was alone, you were not to come home
but when i was on the edge of gone
i was no longer alone
you had come home early
and saw me on the floor
and stopped in shock and horror
and surprise of what you saw
the blood that surrounded me
was indeed my own
i had done it to myself on purpose
when i had come home
i held a note in my hand explaining everything
you were meant to find it
when you got back from your date with 'him'
you dropped to your knees
and saw i was alive
you held my head in your hands
as you started to cry
i told you not to be sad
i told you not to mourn
we both knew, in a couple of seconds
i would be gone
we sat there for a little longer
as i started to pass
the time we'd both been waiting for
finally came at last
you held me in your arms
as you watched me slowly die
i couldn't live like this any longer
so i uttered my last words..
Goodbye

I wrote this poem in maths at school! I entered it before under my friends name because i wasn't a member yet but now i cant find it! so i have entered it again. please vote and comment!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    really sad...i dont knwo what more i can say. just that im sorry you feel this way.
    (yes i do realise ive commented on like all ur poems:P)

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkPrincessLozxXx

    Awwww....so sad....but its a good piece none the less, if you ever did that you know what I would do :'-(
    Love ya heapz
    Lozza

  • 18 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Hello again :D, You are one strong writter i like reading your poems . i know its hard how we think no one understands and how we are depressed , but look around you think of your friend family ... I had thought of that but it did'nt faze on me until a few months ago And there isn't a day I do not thikn about doing it again , I think about it everyday and everytime I look at my scars .. Stay strong you can do anything you set your mind to Thanks for reading my poems hun
    xox
    April~*

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