aww sweetie, this is one of your best poems ever, very heartbreaking. I think it's perfect and I'm so sorry about your loss....I really hope that you are ok, please stay strong gril!!!
Love your poems...

*Love Sabrina*

awww i know it's rough! but i'm here for you! it's a greatly, sad poem! and your not nobody, nobody is nobody! hope things are getting better! always here

~PLP~ lots of hugs and love~

you can never muck up any poem you write. they're always beautiful and many a times inspirational.
much love,
-A

awww, this is a really good poem of yours. Hope things start to get better for you. Hang in there, i know how you feel.

XoX Luvz Samz XoX

Amazing poem. Just reading this aloows me to feel your pain. Stay strong.
Take care always,
- Shell.

Shawdy, you ain't mess it up at all.
This is a really good but painful poem.
Stay strong and hang tight. MUCH LOVE

"Noboddy is perfect, therefore you are perfect" and although you are broken and torn and severely heartbroken, you are still perfect, because you are noboddy o.O great poem. i love all your work hun
~Freak~