I wish I wasn't here

by Elissa   May 15, 2005


How can you look into my eyes
And think that everything is fine
I thought it was pretty obvious
I'm never happy in this life of mine

How can you look at all these scars
And not see all that I have bled
And not know that I'm unhappy
Thinking I would be better of dead

You have no idea how I feel
How I feel inside my soul
I'm not quite sure if its there
Or if its just one big hole

And what I feel inside
Is something you will never see
Because you don't pay attention
You don't care about me

You always think I'm happy
That I never shed a tear
But you don't know how wrong you are
I wish I wasn't here

-I know its not that good, you can vote and comment if you want to-

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  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Why are you putting at the end that you know your poems aren't good and stuff? cuz your very wrong. your poems are freaking EXCELLENT! I dont know what you must be thinking if you dont like them. cuz you write really really good s**t! your poems are so good, Im adding you to my favorites...and also, cuz I can really relate to everything your saying in them. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]

    lol, you doof, there you go simply stating your opinion. heres mine, it sucked, lol jk, i loved it, it was great. check out two of mine, Endless, and Dear God.
    love always
    your friend
    harley

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Quote by unknown:
    "Life is the greatest bargain; we get it for nothing."
    Think you should trow away something you just got 4 free?

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    not thay good.. well guess what elissa i love it...( : ..yea i loved it..i love all your work..so keep writin..<3 lindsey

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