Live or Die?

by SeXiSaMi   May 16, 2005


I wish I was not living
I do not have much to life for
Maybe a few things
And I definatly do not deserve more

I hate it
I am always depressed
I can not handle it
All this bulit up stress

Nothing more comes to my mind
But dying
Or at least hurting myself
It makes me want to start crying

I am sick of people
Telling me what to do
Do they not realize
I have a mind of my own too!

I can not take this
Knowing my dad hates me
And so does my older sister
But don't they see?

Well now I am lost...
Having nowhere to run
When I have problems
Or when I am out of fun

I might have made a mistake
And I realize that
But no matter what I do
These games I am not good at

... sorry i never got around to finishing it but i will just please tell me what you think of it so far thanks! ...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    We all have rough times in our lives and not everybody is going to like us, we just have to accept it and move on. Everybody gets down at times and feels alone, but I promise you hun you have way more to live for then you think. Excellent job very heartfelt and true 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Well now I am lost...
    Having nowhere to run
    When I have problems
    Or when I am out of fun

    These lines are beautifully worded and I like them all. The poem is full of grief and mournful feelings. Keep up the good work :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Lewin

    hey i like this poem i gave it a 5/5, thats how i feel too. thanx for ur comment on my poem. talk to you l8ter
    luv,
    †¤†*~*LuCy*~*†¤â€