I Won't Lose You

by Darien   May 18, 2005


I Won't Lose You

This hole is deep and painful.
My heart use to sit right here.
I gave it to her to hold close.
Now I feel useless without it.

I would drown myself,
with tears I cry.
Every drop I shed,
would add to my love.

She makes me cry,
I'd rather die.
Than lose her,
the first time.

I carved a heart into my wrist.
This blade is my crafting tool.
Its so real how the blood flows.
From one heart to the next.

I would bleed her name,
straight from my heart.
Every drop of blood,
would add to my love.

So bleed me dry,
I'd rather die.
Than lose you,
a second time.

I hang from this rope up high.
A note below will tell you why.
She left me hanging on to her.
She doesn't know who to save.

I'm losing my breath,
as I apologize.
Every breath I lose,
would add to my love.

So leave me high,
I'd rather die.
Than lose you,
forever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I like this poem. It is very emotional and meaningful. I liked this part of your poem the most because I can relate to it so well
    'I would drown myself,
    with tears I cry.
    Every drop I shed,
    would add to my love.'

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I liked this one too....not as much as the last one but this one was very good also....nice job...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    "I would bleed her name,
    straight from my heart.
    Every drop of blood,
    would add to my love."

    Another excellent poem. This verse was my favorite. I just loved the way this poem was written. Another poem full of emotion and heartbreak. Keep writing and stay strong.

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by Naima

    Great I like it alot! Keep it up man!!so cool....Yeah this reads like a song...is it a song....hmm? Well..another amaizng poem. I love the fact that you've become dependent on her, just as much as I hate it. Cause I felt that way before... Like If I didn't have this guy life wouldn't be worth living......Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    So sad! You have such a unique way with your words! You have a lot of talent! Take Care~! Brooke

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