Know Me

by AnotherJournalEntry   May 18, 2005


You only see my smile,
But do you know what's behind that?
All the pain, hate, and sorrow,
The feelings of betrayal.

You hear me laugh,
But is it real?
It's as fake as can be.
You know me, or at least you think you do.

You don't really know me,
You'll never really know me.
There's just to much to it.
I can always hide from you.

Author's Message:
I know, this poem sucks. But it's one of my firsts. Please vote and comment!! I'd like feedback!

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  • 18 years ago

    by crissy

    it was a good poem, i liked it, yea it could use some work but in-all it was good. i'd go w/ 3/5 too. keep up the work an thx for commenting on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    this poem is 3/5..you should try to express in some Strong words..you know what i mean
    but maybe i understand you..my first poems were Very suck..but i hope my work will improve..and hope yours too:)
    Good Luck
    Nema
    XoXoXoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Good job, Jennifer. I liked this poem. Especially the last stanza. keep it up:) And thanks for the comments on my poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Hey..Its good keep it up
    aShLeY

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