That was amazing, but incredibly sad, I'm so sorry you have to put up with it, you are so great, nobody has the right to be mean to you! stay strong
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excellent poem! 5/5

~plp~ lil slam~

Well done!!! Tht poems is very good I enjoyed it. very sad aswell. Another great poem from you : ) 5/5

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amazeing, again I liked the way you place your words and form them into an image, that's what I like about your poems, the way you choose and place the words,The conculsion could of been a bit more expanded but overall wow!!!!!!

I feel I can relate to this poem more than some of your other work, maybe becuase it is more based on reality. It is good to see that you can write about serious subjects as well.

Keep Writing
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great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5

Wow...Excellent poem...I can relate to this very much. I hate bullies...Thanks for your comment. Take care xxx

i hate when people get bullied around it is so stupid though good poem keep it up look at one of my poems "paper" i would appreciate it please

excellent!!!!! wow... absolutely amazing!! keep it up!
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very good...sadly its so true about many places

Bullying is a subject that can never be stressed enough...The physcological abuse is worse than any pain to be felt...Thank you for submitting this, I enjoyed reading your point of view!

This is veerrryyy good. its kinda like once you kill yourself, they all regretit but its "what you wanted". you know? very good, very good 5/5

You have quite a gift, really... I did cringe at the part "Slit their writst..." But the whole thing is excellent...very sad, but true...this touches all the people who have been bullied and possibly the bullies themselves...it's somewhat general, in a good way, so many can relate. I admire your organized control...I mean I'm more of a free style, your presentation is great... :)

Thanks...

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So true. Thanks for writing that.

Wow, beautifully written, you have a talent, a future in poem writing if you wanted, this poem was very touching and sad, great job, keep on writing 5/5

I was bullied but the person who was insulting me was myself. somebody had hurt me so bad that I decided to take whatever they said and repeat it to myself when I did something wrong.

I did kind of get weirded off at the slit wrist thing. It did come together with the last line and all. This can be something everyone can relate to whether the abuser is a parent, a schoolmate, or even the person themselves.

That was sad, but it had meaning, your poems are awesome, keep it up
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