Torn Between Two Lovers

by Renee   May 18, 2005


She's known him for three years,
He's three years her senior.
They stay together in fear,
of her sister discovering their misdemeanor

He has a temper,
she learns to cope.
she loves him to much,
to feel his hand grip her throat.

She goes to school today,
and finds a new freind.
who consoles her in such ways,
that she decides she can't pretend.

She gives her new love everything,
then comes home to an empty world.
How much she would give,
just to be his girl.

The only problem is,
this cancer he must fight.
the doctor gives him,
3 months to end his life.

She can't have both men,
so, now she chooses.
between a man who will give her a broken heart,
or a man who gives her bruises.

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  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    if i couldve i would have given you a 4.5 but i coul;dnt so i gave you a four... this isnt the kind of love poem i was looking for i wanted sweet love... something i could give meaning to for my boyfriend... thanks tho
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    OH MY GOD! That's horrible. I mean nicely written but SO FREAKING SAD. This was definitely NOT a cooucking poem! HAHAHA I like it though. Most love poems always end happy....you threw me for a loop. Nicely done missy !

  • 18 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    This poem was great. I loved the last verse. You're creative and very talented. Keep writing and stay strong.

    -Ice

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    Excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christa

    hey, i really liked your poem. your a great writer. hope to hear from you soon.

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