wow good work on that they both were excellent

Oh, wow. Both poems were amazing. Keep writing.

awww. hot, amazing, romantic, and it even rhymed! that was awsome! keep writing!
jescelle

Both of them where awesome. Did you say yes??? Great job. <3333

thanks for the comments guys...keep them coming..lol..this is not a true story...just a poem. thanks again. take care. :)

wow i thought the poem was extremely good you have a really good talent keep up the good work. check out some of my work.

nice poem girl

wow that was AH-MAZ-ING~ kEEP WRiting and comment me on my poem sumtime! thanks luv yahh...

wow that was AH-MAZ-ING~ kEEP WRiting and comment me on my poem sumtime! thanks luv yahh...

hey all, thanks for the comments, i really appreciate it and i ALWAYS return the favor....keep them coming! :)

wow,thats pationate.its like porno in a poem.lol,good job.

thanks everyone for the comments! i'm not sure if ima make a part three, if i have time i will. and mekala, i get the porno thing alot...everyone told me it was a porno script, not a poem..lmao..well thanks for the comments, take care guys..keep the comments flowing.....

oh my god that poem was really awsome...you really made me picture the whole Scene it was deatailed and WOW keep writing you got some skills
mama

Very Nice!!!

my only question for u is did this kind of proposal really happen? b/cif i did, damn girl!!

woooooow!....great poem! keep writing!

SO HOT!!! I love it!!! I loved the first one too!
Keep them coming!
Love Sarah

I really liked it! Keep it up! Good luck in the furture!

dam that was a pimpass poem!!!! i give u props for the creativty!!! u hav talent and keep up tha good work!!!!
take care
Leonel

bloody hell!!! amazing write!!! took my breath away!!
Just out of curiosity... how old are you?
Hayley-Ree xxx