Comments : Pleasure (sequel)

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    no this is NOT true...and i am fifteen years of age! :) oh and thanks for the comments all! much love! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was so super hot! and completely sweet too!!!!! My favorite stanza was:

    "You tell me you love me,
    and that this was the best night of your life;
    And that there is only one thing that would make it perfect,
    and that is if I accept to be your wife."

    Leaves suspense... Will you accept or will you not? That is what goes through my head... Great poem, keep up the great writing!

    ~BJ~

  • 16 years ago

    by MELi

    Thiis poem is sssssssssoooooooo incredibly sweet!! i love it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Juanita

    Love it a lot i couldnt stop reading =D

  • 16 years ago

    by izzy

    It was beautiful. u made it sound like making love and having sex at the same time. sweet and sexy
    keep it up =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Well that is one way for a guy to ask. Hmm, wish my first was like that. Anyways this was an awesome poem truly great. i gave it a 5/5.