The Split...

by Hayley Marie   May 21, 2005


My Mom And Dad Have Split,
It’s Caused A Massive Shock Through The Town,
People Walk Past Me,
And See My Frown.

They Ask “Hayley, How Are You Doing Darling?”
Please Leave Me Alone,
I Deal With Things In My Way,
And That’s Not With Anyone, Its On My Own!

I Want My Family Together Again,
But If My Mom Is Going To Be Sad,
Then No Way,
I Don’t Want My Mom To Come Back.

That Sounds Mean,
But I Find It Hard To Explain This,
I Have So Much Emotion,
And It Seriously Feels Like S**t!

What I Meant Was,
If My Mom Is Going To Be Unhappy With My Dad,
Then I Don’t Want Her With Him,
Because I Don’t Like Her Being Sad.

But At The Same Time,
My Dads Heart Is Broken,
There Are Way Too Many Things,
Left Unspoken.

In My House Are Many Things,
That Are Not Being Said,
I Have So Many Things To Say,
But I Think I Will Sound Like An Airhead.

I Love My Dad So Much,
But I Hate Seeing Him So Broken,
He Needs To Speak,
But His Thoughts And Emotion Is So Hidden.

I Want My Mom And Dad Together Again,
But I Don’t Want Them To Row,
I Guess It’ll Get Easier…
Somehow!!

*Depression*Is*An*Illness* ©

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    thanks guys!!! means alot!!! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey another good poem but needs a little work on the rhyming scheme. like katie said - it doesn't matter. Nice piece though - i'll give it a 4! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    good poem, sorry this happened, it was emotional and although the flow was different and not continuous it doesnt matter as many poems do not need to flow to be good, like enslavement said, well done and keep it up :) xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    Good poem...

    You tell the reader exactly what you want him to know...You don't have to concentrate in order to understand this one...

    Perhaps somewhat simple, as I see it.

    there is no constant rhyming scheme, if any at all, and it doesn't have a very obvious flow. However, many excellent poems are vert untraditional.

    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    twas a good poem....