Whassup, Kalah, thanx for the comments!!! Hey it's really sad, no one's hurting U, R they? Or is this just creative? TAKE CARE HUN HUGS

Wow. I just cant believe some of the amazing stuff that you write sometimes.

Her face is stained with tears,
Cuts are smeared across her hips,
He keeps on accepting "I'm fine"
While there's blood all over her lips.

That was my favourite part of the whole poem. It was just so amazingly done. The wording, how the poem flowed. Really amazing work hun.
-A

awww sad but i love it! this is a great write! the love with a one year warranty thats really creative, and it has a good solid ending too

~take care~ PLP~ lots of hugs and love~

woah, this really reached me, i got so into it while reading >>>

His love came with a warranty,
A "please return after 1 year"
'When things get to tough for him,
You're to bring his love back here.'

>>>
Those lines just caught my attention. Awesome Job your really good.
Take Care
Lovez Samz~*

a bunch of words that make an excellent poem. i really enjoyed this one its so..sad..yet..yea just sad haha but i like it a lot keep up the good work sweety
~Freak~

A bunch of words that fit together so well. Beautifully sad, but well penned hun, keep up the amazing work.

Love It!

aww that is so saddd...it ended so beautifully...aww..I hope you are okay.

wow again. you are very good....i love your poems, they are sad, but they are so real...... keep it up, and I will keep reading.Love ya Becky