Destiny

by -->>Vicky   May 24, 2005


If i was to die today,
i will happily go to heaven,
because if i die,
it's because my destiny was written that way.

you know how people say,
"be careful, don't risk your life"
i don't think you are going to die from something you do,
you die when you have to die and there's nothing you can do to change it.

Your whole life was written somewhere, by someone else.
Like it or not, your destiny you can't change.
If I'm to die today, right now!
maybe i couldn't even finish writing this poem.

Even though I'm inside,
in my house, if my destiny said for me to die now,
i would, no matter what.
so be careful, you never know what comes next.

Make sure you do everything you have to do,
before it is too late,
same thing with those you love,
let them know now, before you lose your chance.

Please rate and comment...i will do the same for you

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  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Great poem and thanks 4 leavin a comment for my poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    Hey vicky,
    ur poem is pretty good, i think that ur poem is true. i kinda have mixed feeling about destiny, but keep up the good work.
    ~*Kayla*~
    aka
    ~*Baby-Face*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Libby M

    You write beautifully. And there is a lot of truth to what you say. Your destiny will take place no matter what you might try to do in this life to change it. Keep on writing... And remember only God can change your destiny.

    God Bless.

    Libby

  • wow, its a great poem, nice and deep... i like that and i believe it to some exstent... i guess no one REALLY knows but i do know that this is en excellent poem! well done!
    >>5/5<<
    *bec* xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Saliva t i o n x

    Destiny.... lovein it!

    5/5 also. :]