This isvery cute. I love how you have the sense of humor and openess to write about fairy tales. Very original by what I have seen and very good as well.

--Sher

Haha hey, this is really good...very creative!! haha, take care and keep on writing..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Excellent! Would you mind if I share this? Funny and full of character.

Great poem, 5/5. Very clever coz i must've bin hard 2 rhyme.
Emma x

Really creative, fantastic effort!! 5/5. Keep up the great work

Kelly

OMG THAT WAS GREAT!!! IT WAS SO CUTE AND REALLY FUNNY AND TRUE. ITS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST POEMS I HAVE READ SO FAR. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Amazingly entertaining! I love fairy tales and the twist you put on them is hilarious! Great poem~Holly

Hahah thats funny stuff good job I loved reading it you are very talented and creative

Haha dude that's awesome.

Wow...that was so cool, it really flowed! good job hun! ~*Lyz*~

That's really funny!

so different and sooo good. really funny, like side splittingly funny,keep it up. (if u can match a poem like this) and il say it again... very different. in a good way. samx

lol, adorable...5

that was soo cute send me some more

heyhey...that was awsum! i love it..it really made me smile..

LOL...HIL-AR-I-OUS. Like the others said, very original. You managed to keep a good flow, and keep me laughing. Great job! 5/5!

~rolo

That is so cute and unique..lol. It ended really well and especially the last few stanzas fit in very well! My favorite one was the one about Ariel the mermaid trading her voice for feet. Lol. Very nice, I don't really have any critique.Take care,
Dorotea

lol very good i loved it i even read it aloud to my brother he loved it too!

Loved it, plain and simple. Very well done.

Haha Cute girl!!! It was excellent and thats probably what i'd also do:) 5*