THAT WAS REALLY SOMETHING. IT IS VERY DIFFERENT FROM YOUR OTHER WORKS. BUT IT STILL WAS VERY GOOD. MY FATHER WORKED ON GROUND ZERO SO I AGREE WITH ALL U SAID. IT WAS REALLY AMERICAN.

I like the strength and power behind your words! Very well written~Holly

Nicely written song!! good to hear there are still people who are in the countrys pride! 5/5!

I'm not American, so this is a bit of a biad point of view from me. It's good, but since I'm not American, it's not so appealing. But marks for patrioticness.

madman..lol. i wont tell you who i thinks the real madman cause i'd probably get a lot of hate mail ;) well, this was a great poem and i loved the way you put together some pieces of history. great job. 5/5

Hehe, I liked how you used Madman..lol. This poem was strong and especially because you capitalized the last lines the force of the poem came out really well. Nice job, keep writing.
Dorotea

Excellent.

Very nice poem.. i gave it a 5/5

this poem reaslly fits lol, i loved it, it was a good strong message aswel!!!

hey great poem! i really like it

awesome poem, very powerful and well written. take care.

i love this one.. very full of emotion.. i love ur last line.. and also the rhyme
ive read ur fairytale reality check and advice for cinderella b4, and tho am not in the mood now, its amazing..
thnx 4 sharing
take care
keep up the talent

the end was definately the best part!! it flowed so well and the meaning was great! this was a refreshing and original topic to write on! awesome job, again! 5/5

peace,
abcede

Thank you for the comment. I really like this poem, it should go under life>inspirational poems. This was a great poem, keep it up =)

cool.

Yeah girl!! GET YOU SOME! that was hot