Comments : United We Stand

  • 14 years ago

    by NIKKI

    THAT WAS REALLY SOMETHING. IT IS VERY DIFFERENT FROM YOUR OTHER WORKS. BUT IT STILL WAS VERY GOOD. MY FATHER WORKED ON GROUND ZERO SO I AGREE WITH ALL U SAID. IT WAS REALLY AMERICAN.

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like the strength and power behind your words! Very well written~Holly

  • 14 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Nicely written song!! good to hear there are still people who are in the countrys pride! 5/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by Darien

    I'm not American, so this is a bit of a biad point of view from me. It's good, but since I'm not American, it's not so appealing. But marks for patrioticness.

  • 14 years ago

    by Carmen

    madman..lol. i wont tell you who i thinks the real madman cause i'd probably get a lot of hate mail ;) well, this was a great poem and i loved the way you put together some pieces of history. great job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Hehe, I liked how you used Madman..lol. This poem was strong and especially because you capitalized the last lines the force of the poem came out really well. Nice job, keep writing.
    Dorotea

  • 14 years ago

    by Chad

    Excellent.

  • 14 years ago

    by Stacinator

    Very nice poem.. i gave it a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    this poem reaslly fits lol, i loved it, it was a good strong message aswel!!!

  • hey great poem! i really like it

  • 14 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    awesome poem, very powerful and well written. take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by NannO

    i love this one.. very full of emotion.. i love ur last line.. and also the rhyme
    ive read ur fairytale reality check and advice for cinderella b4, and tho am not in the mood now, its amazing..
    thnx 4 sharing
    take care
    keep up the talent

  • 14 years ago

    by abcede

    the end was definately the best part!! it flowed so well and the meaning was great! this was a refreshing and original topic to write on! awesome job, again! 5/5

    peace,
    abcede

  • 14 years ago

    by Nicholle

    Thank you for the comment. I really like this poem, it should go under life>inspirational poems. This was a great poem, keep it up =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    cool.

  • 12 years ago

    by abcede

    Yeah girl!! GET YOU SOME! that was hot