Beautiful.
Can't beat a dedication.

- Kal.

very gd especially

You will no longer have to fear
of hurting yourself again
I will be here to dry your tear
to make sure your pain reaches the end
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nice poem dude..i feel you..

Brilliant poem, well done, it was short but to the point I really enjoyed it, keep it up

Hey hunny, i do hope that you are alright! I'm fine - for now :)

Thankyou - sure did put a smile on my face :)

That's such a sweet thing to do for Amanda! Very well done! I like how you used come fly away with me beautiful. ~Brooke~

Yeah it’s short but who said poems have to be short
I thought it was really nice and sweet and gave you a five because I loved it
Well done hun xox

Short And Good! I Love The Message Behind This Poem It Was So Sweet :) 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

AWWW this is sooo sweet! Your a great writer!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxo

really good! keep it up! :-)
luvs always,
Ashli

:'( *tear*... great job! i loved it! 5/5
love always,
abcede

wow thats is really great my fav part:Take my hand, spread your wings
come fly away with me
I'll show you what tomorrow brings
I will set you spirit free
keep writing
lotta love wendy

I liked this poem to, it spoke out in a way and showed a lot of feeling. Great writing.

short and the emotion was great. 5/5