I sorry god im a loser

by Robyn   May 27, 2005


God why
why did you let me down
i know i wasn't true to you some times
i realized i was a failure

god why
why did i lose
i gave it all i had
i put firth every thing

why god
Payden and Michael loved it
why did you hate it
i did my hair and make-up for you

why god why
i put my faith in you
i preyed every night
Morgan cheated

why why why god
was it my speech
was it how i dressed
god what was it

god why
why am i blaming you
its not your fault its mine
i didn't do enough

god I'm sorry
i did try hard enough
Olivia tried harder
i didn't give it my all

god i am a loser
i lost what i really wanted deep down
i really did want it
i just didn't show it

I'm hopeless god
i have nothing to live for
I'm point less
i have nothing to get up to anymore

I'm a loser and a failure
and i blamed
the one man
that has always been there fore me

i lost my election
and my affection
i am a loser
but I'm not no boozer

i was running for school vice president but
lost to a cheater
i preyed every night
to god asking him to help gild me along the hard path

my speech was perfect for a king
my poster were the best
my life was good
i had friends but not enough

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    thankz sarah. robert that really didnt make since and if you didnt notic i was runing for my School and i wasnt kicking my self it was just a poem on the top of my head becase i was so mad at God for not helping me and all. well thanks for your comments guys
    love yea
    robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    ok on the 2nd paragraph
    Firth-should be fourth
    on the 12th paragraph
    gild-should be guide
    you say your a loser because of an election first of all I doubt the content. any man in politics I doubt would be in such a self pity mood as to kick himself so bad in anyones eyes even Gods. All and all I find it very unbeleiveable. But thats just my opinion oh well. If you get time please any of my featured work and comment and vote it would mean a great deal to me. Take care...

  • 18 years ago

    by Fierce

    Well, to start with..you're not a looser. It's not the end of the world when you loose an election. You were made beautifully and obviously it wasnt mean to happen. You were made ofr bigger and better things. The sooner you realise that, the better life will become. I loved this poem, it shows your pain and anger. Keep it up!
    Love Sarah
    Xoxo

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