My lightened darkness

by AngelWithin   May 28, 2005


"Cheer up" They said
As They looked at my face
"You'll be fine" They sighed
As they invaded my space
"Stop being miserable" They called
As my parents looked at me, disgraced and appalled.
So what had I done
Nothing to bad
Written some odd words down on a pad
grabbed some scissors
nothing too Much
But now my arms are sore to the touch.
"Attention seeking" Some would say
But they don't live the life I do every day
An empty head, no space to move
And now no word, will help to sooth
The pain, I'm feeling now
Some try to help, but how can they... How?
They can't , they can't help any way
This is my life
My light and darkened day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ||The...Nameless||

    I can feel the emotion in this and because i have gone throught this situation my self... it really tells a story really well....
    The rhyming is very good and thats why i thing that the poem flows so well.... The is a very deep poem which leaves and everlasting affect on me so thankyou for the insite throught your poetry........
    Til next time bye

  • 18 years ago

    by HeavenzEyez

    I think this poem you have written must be about self harm.

    I understand what you are going through as my best friend she cut herself for over 2 years, i tried to help her so much but nothing ever worked, she also tried to kill herself. this is how i know how you feel and you must try and stop, coz its hurting other people aswell, as i can see from your poem

  • 18 years ago

    by >>Christii

    Wow, this was really good. I liked how you set it up, and how it could really get you deep into it. Keep up the good work, cuase your going great.

    ~*~Rika~*~

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