I love the awesome rhythm of the piece. 5/5 keep it up

Love, Heather

I like this poem. It speaks of deep depression. Not everyone has been there, but for those of us that have, it rings true. 5/5

Excellent poem! Can you check out sum of my poems it wud mean a lot to me! thanks! ♥

DOOOOOD!
I must say that poem kicks ass, keep it up :-p

hey ryan! great poem, i'm so happy you posted something!

aww thats sad but i love it 5/5