It's nice, but repeating the same phrase many times sounds tiring...And I have a question:what do you mean by "to hard"?maybe too hard?Sorry I just don't get it:) It was good though and we're looking foward to your poerty

wow, I really enjoyed reading this one.
you're really talented johnny.
wish you the best,
marjan

Very good message! Another well written piece! I look forward to reading more of your poetry! ~Brooke~

oooh.. i liked it!! great job, again! i liked the repeditive "To he who tries to hard"! it added a nice effect! awesome job! 5/5
ABCEDE ^,^

that was a lot less mean..but it was still very good. can't wait till u get more poems up...i'm going to add u to my favorites :)

Prefer this one to the other. It has a good theme and rhymes well.

Awesome job !! I liked this one alot alot alot . hehehe . I liked the msg in it it was great . Hope to see more writting from you ! "To he who tries to hard " i loved that .
April 5/5

inspiring....thats what i got from it...erg osrry i'd make a longer msg but ma bro is buggin me!!! bya

Not a long poem, but just the right length. you speak volumes in only a few sentences. You have real talent. I hope you submit more work. I place thee on my faves list.

I can certainly relate, being one of those people. I like it, well done.

great write i sorta live like this trying to hard to make every1 happy and i wish to die everyday 5/5 :(

Awsome poem! Your really good..Keep it up =D