by cowgirlstar26 May 31, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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I saw her dark Grey head |
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I like the no stanzas. reminds me of ee cummings. very sad though but accurately shows humans cruelty just for money.. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
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Wow thats pretty sad. Like the other poem, theres two subjects in one line and put it in stanzas. But overall it was a very good poem! 5/5 |