very well written! i really liked the way it flowed so wel, but is really sad... it breaks my heart, and i hope stuff gets better for you! 5/5 *KISSES*~Corrie

Continual strong emotion and deep rooted. You depth has such artistic quality which makes your work all the better. If true, hopefully this relieves some of the pain.

Strong Emotion In The Piece! I Can Relate 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow, very strong emotions. I think we can all relate. 5/5.

Wow. Flawless flow and strong emotion...Excellent poem!

A very strong and angry wall with somethign far deeper and more sorrowful behind it....truly well done.

Very powerful. Again, Jason said it all. This is wonderful.