Lies

by kiara   Jun 1, 2005


You said you'd catch me, when i fall.
You said you'd be there, through it all.
You said you'd dab away my tears.
You said you'd protect me, from the leers.
You said you'd always stand by my side.
You said you'd never run and hide.
You said you'd cure my darkest fears.
You said you'd wipe away, the deepest smears.
You said alot, and you lied.
It hurts to know, our friendships died.
I plundged into darkness, here i dwell.
Longing for the one, i loved so well

*plz comment, id like 2 improve and i need feedback*

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  • 18 years ago

    by F U

    Hey great , meaningful poem, keep up the good work 5/5 frm me, oh and thanx for commentin on my poem =)

    rach
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! awesome poem.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by baby.bluestar

    hey! i dont think u need to improve!! this is a really good poem, full of emotion i love it alot! keep up the good work k xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Great job! I really love your poem. Keep writing, you have some talent. Take care.

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