Ice

This is for an English assignment so I'd really appreciate feed back..

police track down kids on ice
families ripped apart
little Tracy's turned to drugs
their face will soon be a mug

flick off the TV
hope she doesn't hear me
sob from our last big fight

my pumpkin lies awake tonight hasn't slept in days
her arms are matted torn and tattered
eyes filled with haze
what happened to my little girl?
with high grades and stunning looks
is this a faze or something more grave?
i fear for her life
i fear for herself
as she creates her own world
full of hate
full of filth

bugs are in me
get them out
i feel them twitch and climb
scratch at the spots
see the skin rot
my heightened sense of time
scream in fear
mum runs near
sirens can soon be heard

enter a white washed world
full of sickos
all out to get me
dodge their needles, infested beds
i know the truth
there going to kill me
wont let them near me
crash to the floor, it all slows down
another cycle complete.

youth in hospital
ice destroys life
pretend bugs fill their minds
eyes see everything there or not
cannot sleep for days
few days later high is over
crash for a week
where will they be a year from now
alive or dead
jail or bed
it hard to control
once its started
not easily parted
ice becomes your life