~Deeper~

by Janine   Jun 2, 2005


Deeper and deeper
thinner and thinner
is what beocmes of the skin for the sinner

the sharp edge on the icy blade
is no comparison to the pain of what remains

a tear of blood sinks lower and lower as it leaves scars on the owner

another wish of saying no
and holding back your urges
just turned into a yes and and the anger just controlled its self

the silence after the death of the victem is nothing compared to the depth of the wound

looking into the wound you see the tears of which the victem cried

as you go deeper and deeper you see the bleeding soul

bleeding out the pain bleeding out the anger

as you search in that wound which goes
deeper and deeper

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  • 18 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    'Tis a very nice work of art, I did enjoy it.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    i like the poem. it's good w/a nice flow....but may i suggest a spell check? it's better when there's no distraction from the actual piece of art..what the words are actually saying.

  • 18 years ago

    by cooldude900

    i think its very deeeeeeeeeep
    raaaaaaaawwwr
    james

  • 18 years ago

    by Janine

    hey can u please comment...this isn't realli the kinda poem i would write but hey just tell me what ya think
    love janine