Angel Of Death

I approach my angel
of death,
for every time our lips would meet
id be dragging myself into
another battle of pain
and hell , he would whisper
in my ear of how
much he loved me and
how much he needed me
in his life,

i admit i fell for the lies he
would tell and it put me
through hell , for when i would ask
him about the truth i found out, he would
say
"baby girl thats not true
i want to be with you",

id fall for it again , but in the
end i could not bear it
any longer ,

so i approach my angel
of death once again , this
time with a lump in my throat
and a broken heart in my chest,

i simply say i will love you
until the day of my death,
nothing you can do
will change my feelings for you ,
i only ask of one thing ,
its either me or her,
and if you choose her

for it'll be me that you
lose forever....

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