Suicide

by CaptainTyingKnots   Jun 3, 2005


Grab the blade and slit your wrists
dont worry scars will fade away
grab your favorite blood tipped knife
and follow each and every vein
ignore the pain cause when its over
thats the last you'll ever feel
dont worry all of this real
you know that you must do this because you cant deal
all you wanted was just one friend
but you've come to find they all pretend
so you decide to go
you deserve to die so slow
your life fades away as you watch the last drops of blood flow from your wrist
and from your suicide that wont be missed

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I love the last line
    tis was great
    i lveo it
    5/5 it desevres nothing less

  • 18 years ago

    by Mrs Reynolds- far from fixed

    i liked this very much, it really shows how some one would feel wen commiting sucicde. worthless. and i really got that from this poem, its very very good. keep writing, and if u find that time would u comment on my poems? thannk u

    well done
    xxxxxxxxx

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