An interesting read, which seemed varied. There wasn't really any structure to the poem, but thats not nessecarily a bad thing.
One minor point though, maybe seperate you line asking for votes/comments from the poem itself.

Keep Writing
Nici

that was really nice. I liked it, check out my poem 'born blind' thanks!

ahh, how sweet is that?! I loved this one too! *KISSES*~Corrie

Short but down to the point, really like it.

Well written. I don't really like love poems that much but it pulled it off.

Wow, that was so totally awesome......a 5 indeed.......

I agree with Nici there was no structure at all, made it hard for me to feel this poem it just felt like you tossed those word's in there because they llooked like it would work there. Sorry dude didn't like this one. 3 out of 5

Brilliant! shows how far some people are willing to go for the sake of love!

This was interesting...Despite its lack of a structure, I enjoyed it...And I don't often do that...

I like the way you wrote...I dunno why...I just did...

I don't think you really did the title justice I saw the desparation there but you never combind the two together it was a good read maybe a bit too flowery for me but I don't think you read told the tail that good or at least come close to the title...

Once again confused, but good....:)

Interesting

Picture perfect desperate addiction to something you love, Well written and portrayed.

I liked it. Never give up! But u're very talented.!

that was so sweet. the begininng didnt go w/ the rest of the poem, though

I guess i forgot to state, what i mean by "the devils suicide", everyone is happy and no more saddness and grief..