The creek

by silhouette fairy   Jun 6, 2005


I'm sitting by the creek
the creek is a way they speak

they speak of nothing much
nothing much is worth while

while the trickling water flows
flows over the little pebbles

pebbles without an error
an error is like nothing

nothing is like everything
everything is wild

wild that speaks
speaks around the creek

the creek that I'm sitting by
I'm sitting by a resting animal

a resting animal has to breath
breath for life

life is the creek
the creek that I'm sitting by

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  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    thanks for commenting Silver Wolf I'm working on the broken flow but if you have any ideas please lend a hand to help "the creek" flow smoothely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    this is a really good poem. i l;ike the origonal use of flow and repetition although the flow is sometimes a little broken in places. but i really like it. very origonal

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