Her last kiss

by rbmo401   Jun 6, 2005


Descending into crying eyes
bleeding in the drains of a stained bathroom sink
the pain brightened the day
opened my senses like a needle in my thumb
instant satisfaction foaming from my wrist
flowing
streaming
he painted the room with his own color
eating the concern away from your heart
a single tear falls
She dropped to her knees
a snicker is muttered from her pulsing lips
on the verge of laughter the tear lands silently
like a tree in the woods when no one is around
grasping the fallen hand
denial
sadness
understanding
forgiveness
she dried her eyes and stood
turned
wanting to run
she hesitates
applies a coat of ruby red
one last kiss
a deep breath
a sy of relief
her last goodbye

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  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    wow that was great.....very heart breaking....i'll give it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    Thats the type of poem i really like! Great job and keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    This is good. I especially liked:

    "the pain brightened the day
    opened my senses like a needle in my thumb
    instant satisfaction foaming from my wrist"

    You're a great writer. Thanx for commenting on my poem :)

    xoxoRachel

  • 18 years ago

    by rbmo401

    This is one that I submit everywhere. And it usually gets some good responses. enjoy