by Ashleigh Skye Jun 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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You don't see the angel falling, |
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wow that was tough i mean that was an awesome poem i mean well i dont know what i mean that poem was freakin awesome that was really good |
by jencam
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amazing! this is truly terrific. Nice job! |
by DANI
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hayley the poem writer!!! this poem is in my favorites!!! c u in skool!!! x.x.x.x.x.x.x. |
by Lyla
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woah that was heavy.....so sad..... |
by otto
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another good poem, like you writing style suggestion- in paragraph 5, and 6 the last line on both of them try use diferent words to protray the same meaning but it make it those lines flow better, not that the flow was good it was good it's just a suggestion |