Just Laugh...

by Luke   Jun 7, 2005


Take A PULL, on this glass,
and I FEEL
Pain Discomfort in my eyes
Chains wrapping Enclosing
Can't you Feel it RISING?
cocky arrogant Calm
So steady...
TENSION
I can't help but Laugh
My Hair curls,
touches My HORNS, They balance my Halo,
WAIT
for fall, for me to fall,
Love this Downfall
downPour from HE(ll)AVEN
I am crazy, Am I Crazy?
because I laugh
i can't Help but LAUGH

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Awesome job mate. A very disjointed piece. I don't know if it was done on purpose, but you mention insanity (or the narrative being crazy), and your style influences abnormalty, which can be seen as being crazy.
    A very nice poem. The "HE(ll)AVEN" bit is a nice touch. This poem could be great to read in between the lines, and look past the nonesense theme. I liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Krete

    I love the intensity of all of your poems - sorry I havent commented lately. And it does warm my heart to hear from you! I'll e-mail you.

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