sorry my computer isn't letting me vote right now! but yet again another beautiful poem with very good vocabulary! wonderful job hun!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

It reminds me of that Guns N' Roses song - Live and let die. I have no freakin' idea why though lol. Very depressing and sad poem hun <3

Love yaz,
From Kal.

xxxxx :D

A pritty cool one

Really good poem and some what sad

I enjoyed it

-Josiah

great sad poem! 25/5 =) i like it!

Yeh it had great vocab that was great.
the poor guy is what i thought as i was reading it, so really well done
x x x

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!