Great write. There are parts that I agree with completely, and those I don't, but it is a very intriguing peice.

Brad
Champagne

Constantly amazing me. How can someone who seems to have such a good, gentle demeanor even contemplate worlds like these? An enigma you remain. 5/5

I want your mind, you're absolutely brilliant. Love the poem, such a macabre piece! =) 5/5

Love ya!

This is a really good poem, shows the true inosence of children. Flows really well, i think you're a really good poet. Thanks for writing something so inspiring.
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WOW that was such a strong amazing powerful poem! The ending ugh wow. Amazing write. I loved every bit of it. My eyes where glued to the screan. Excellent excellent work. <3333

wow...this is breathtaking. wow...absolutely beautiful!!!! you're such an incredible writer. keep up the amazing work!
Ariane
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thank you , that was an awesome poem an dhope to here more. :) any way i gave u 5/5 cuz it was so raw and new.

-faithfulserenity, aka- christina

ooooooooooooooooh!!!....can use my favourite word here, MORBID, very good, very well expressed, fluent, yadda yadda, brilliant and MORBID....he he....ok...going....*retreats to corner and breathes into paper bag*
toodles
lucyfer
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