Pain of a Tragedy

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 10, 2005


I sit in a tree
Looking at people passing by
I'm thinking of you
Slowly, I hurt and cry
Holding hands
Was something I loved to do
But that was something
That we did few
Even something
As simple as a kiss
Something simple
As the feel of your lips
Oh god,
This pain burns
My life
Has taken a big turn
Just thinking
Of our first kiss that one time
I don't know anymore
So was it a crime?!
SO many things I wish
I would have done
Put my arms around you, or hold you
Why wasn't it done?
Bleed my veins dry
Let me sit up here
Death
I shall no longer fear

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Sorry I had to couldn't resist :D
    This was really good especially after just reading first kiss because its kinda like the end and what not, ok finally I have a opinion on these lines "I would have done
    Put my arms around you, or hold you
    Why wasn't it done?" the done should be changed on one of them to make it easier to read and it would flow better.

    Sadly enough thats all I got :(
    I gotta make friends with a sh*t writer cause you bringing me down lol.

    great work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Great 5/5 check out my stuff x

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    wow..that was amazing so much feeling, so little words!

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